"These are the rules I've picked up along the way to help me remain invisible when I'm writing a book, to help me show rather than tell what's taking place in the story" Elmore Leonard.
  some favorite quotes from Elmore Leonard:
  Style is the sound of the writing. 
  Writing is rewriting.
  It takes me 4 pages of writing to get 1 page I like.
  It gets harder.
    and another he quotes:
  Words can get in the way of what you're trying to say. Joseph Conrad.
   
  
 
